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» Poem: Re-occuring Love Disaster
Re-occuring Love Disaster
written by cryptic_misery
07:58 PM 9/10/04
Excited
Finally going to see you
Just a few more hours!!
You excited too?
I love you!

Nervous
On a plane now
New friend
Talking so long
About my journey to see you

Crying
Plane has arrived!!
Hugging my new friend goodbye
Good luck with your love!
Thank you! I can't wait!
I've waited a long time
For this moment

Racing
My heartbeats faster
Each step I take down the gate
A tear rolls down my cheek

Happiness
I see you standing there
My heart stops
Dropping everything
I leap onto you
Swinging in your arms

Pause
Ground shakes
Moving away
Don't let go!!!!
Dont... let... go....
Pulled away

Darkness
You've faded
Hand held out strong
Trying to find you
Can't... find you..
Getting weak....='(

Cold
Tear rolls down my arm
Crying alone
Sadness takes over
Lost all

Shocked
Bound to nothing
Numb feelings are all I have now

Sadness
I wake up
What do I see?
My hand is straight out
As If i'm still trying to reach him...
And I lay soaked in my tears....


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Dream I had. Very scary dream. but I know that I will see my love. I just KNOW I will.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Trapezium (9-10-2004 - 08:10 PM)
that seems like one of them dreams that just happens because it's exactly the opposite of what you want

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