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» Poem: Stuck
Stuck
written by lost_cause
11:15 PM 9/12/04
all of the things that hurt me
have stopped and gone away
somehow i refuse
to go away and leave this place
the pain has stopped
and yet it burns
for liberation
my heart yearns
i want to be a part of this
i want to be included
my whole world fell apart
when the darkness intruded
the pieces have been scattered
never in one place
i fear i'll never find them
or have them be replaced
ripped into a million parts
thrown across the sea
my soul will never be whole again
from this prison i won't be freed


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by drowninginmyblood (9-13-2004 - 10:59 PM)
I'll comment! I thought that was really good. You really expressed your emotions well. Great Job!

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