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» Poem: bleed
bleed
written by lost_cause
12:40 AM 9/13/04
the pain i feel around you
knowing what i dont have
makes me want to cut and bleed
you really hurt me bad
i try to act happy
ist all my little play
i try to act like i dont care
when you treat me this way
you act like theres still something
like there is hope for use again
so i stick around and wait
like i will eventually win
slit my skin anywhere
just to feel the pain
want you bad and you know
so why treat me this way
why act like everythins fine
whenever im around
if you really dont want me back
tell me about it now
you want to be single
i want to be with you
tell me if im just a propr
a girl for you to use
the shit you do
like make out with me
it leads me on
and makes me want to bleed


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old... but it's okay

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by Darkwolfgirl (9-13-2004 - 02:57 AM)
awesome, not the whole bleeding part but ur poem is very cool.

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