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Illusions
written by lost_cause11:45 PM 9/13/04The happiness and joy you bring
The tingle inside that makes you sing
Illusions
The light resonation around you
The way you helped me to pull through
Illusions
The reminesses from the past
The love of him I though would last
Illusions
The days I have felt so alive
The hope I had that he'd survive
Illusions
How you make me feel worth something
How I pray the end's not coming
Illusions |
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» Comments / Feedback | by drowninginmyblood (9-14-2004 - 12:35 PM)
Good job, I liked the way you set the poem up, and the content was good too. |
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