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float to the top
written by DontFearAConcequence
08:40 PM 9/18/04
In and out of the water my lifeless body bobs
Inside my body my heart no longer throbs
Nothing of me is in pain anymore
Into my flesh, countless rocks have torn
I know in some way I am at fault
For my life’s sudden halt
Somehow the blame will be passed to me
But now I’m dead and my mind is freed
No one will suspect it’s my dad who threw me in
Even though he walks with the most peculiar grin
Now I’m dead, pale and blue
Maybe somehow ill start over new


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i really dont know...maybe my dad will kill me..never know

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by genuinely_fake (9-18-2004 - 09:00 PM)
a poem about dying........how original(!)

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