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Broken Tattered Confused
written by DontFearAConcequence11:16 PM 9/19/04Im Broken
but you dont seem to care
Im Broken
but slowly youve begun to repair
Im Broken
but that doesnt bother you
Im Broken
but you see the real me shine through
Im Tattered
but you help make me complete
Im Tattered
but my fears you help me defeat
Im Tattered
but you see past all that
Im Tattered
but you protect me from attack
Im Confused
but you guide me along
Im Confused
but you never let me be wronged
Im Confused
but you show me what to do
Im Confused
but im okay cause i have you |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i dont know who this is to, im looking for the person who helps me through everything
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Darkwolfgirl (9-20-2004 - 02:06 AM)
| awesome poem. that would sound like me on a good day, but not today. he broke me thrice before and he never ceases to hurt me once more. |
by hybridxero (9-20-2004 - 04:05 AM)
| You're very good at writing deep poems. I like poems that express what you feel on the inside. I write poems because my sister (she's only 1 year younger) thinks she knows me but she's wrong.
Keep writing deep! |
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