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» Poem: No good enough... So why try
No good enough... So why try
written by lost_cause
01:15 AM 9/21/04
You tell me You trust me
You can talk to me about anything
And yet what you write
Isn't the same thing
You express through your words...
Well so do I
To hear that I'm not good enough
Makes me cry
I thought we were the best
Together always
But obviously
You don't need me
You don't need my help
You don't need my love
You are fine enough without me
To try and help out
You have your sister
She's the only one you have Right?
Well that's what you said in your poem
That shed a new light
It showed me that
I'll never be good enough
That no matter what I do
You don't need my touch
When I thought I could help
You out with things
I guess you didn't really
Need me
But that's okay...
You just should of told me
So I didn't try so hard
To help out when apparently
It didn't do anything...
That is what you wrote...
I can't ever help you...
So why try?
Just so you know
You always helped me
You always found a way
To make me see...
Too bad I don't help anyone
That well...
I'll stay by myself in this dark lonely shell
And suffer forever in my eternal hell...


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
A little pissed tonight... Everything just sorta crashed and burned... Very quickly too... I could go for someone to talk to if anyone is interested...

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