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» Poem: Empty Eyes Pt. 3
Empty Eyes Pt. 3
written by lost_cause
10:39 PM 9/21/04
She is lost
Inside herself
He tries to save her
From eternal hell
She cries out
Without a sound
She comes running
He's not bound
To save her
She is stuck for all time
He wants to protect her
He would die trying
But all the help
Couldn't save her soul
He can work forever
But he'll soon grow old
She has empty eyes
He loves her so much
But her lifeless soul
Can't feel his touch


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by bleedblack (9-22-2004 - 12:51 AM)
i like it ... i feel a sort of relation to this poem ...

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