» Poem: A rose for my sweetheart |
A rose for my sweetheart
written by The grey raven08:11 PM 9/28/04A rose for my sweetheart
Maybe a few
A rose so beautiful
Only for you
A thorn for my sweetheart
Drain all his blood
A thorn so sharp
I will do as I should
A grave for my sweetheart
Deep in the ground
A grave so cold
My love, sleep sound
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» Comments / Feedback | by DevilKisses4u (9-28-2004 - 11:02 PM)
aww its not crap. i like it. its very interesting!! |
by Confused_Girl (9-29-2004 - 01:02 AM)
It's not crap, it is deep and real. It reminds me of my boyfriend who calls me sweetheart. |
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