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Jenny -(song for our band)PLZ COMMENT!!
written by cryptic_misery05:18 PM 10/4/04Broken apart
From her sad distant heart
Waiting in the end
Jenny's lost without friends..
Caught in the middle of her tears and her eyes
Jenny lets out shallow fears and lies
So much more to lose
Then she'll ever have to find
Jenny gets stuck
she's been left behind
Jenny's life is fading away..
All of the light is cascading to gray
No place left to turn
No place left to hide
Spinning around she falls down inside..
Herself, she's bleeding again..
The knife is wet
soaking up all that she's bled
No one will listen to what she's said
Now jenny lies here... dead...
Broken home
She dies all alone
Waiting for friends
she's lost in the end
Caught in the middle of her fears and her lies
Jenny lets out shallow tears from her eyes
Jenny's... LIFE is fading away...
All of the LIGHT.. cascading to gray
No PLACE... left to turn or to hide
Spinning around she falls down.. inside...
HERSELF!! SHE'S BLEEDING AGAIN!!!
THE KNIFE IS WET!
SOAKING UP ALL THAT SHE'S BLED
NO ONE HAS LISTENED TO WHAT SHE'S SAID
NOW JENNY SHE LIES HERE... DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!
(guitar/drum solo)
(slower)
Jenny's life... has faded away...
She won't see another day....
No place left to go, now no one will hide...
Too bad no one listened...
And felt what she cried..... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Song is about Jenny, the more idea of an inside person, not a real one, and the idea of the song is that Jenny had something bad happen to her, and everybody she told didn't believe her. She gets so caught up in her fears and tears that she just... well kills herself basically.. She is the aspect of our generation, that if something happens to someone, it's going to drive them to a bad place, even suicide... So jenny is the lost soul who is saving every kid out there, showing people that you NEED TO LISTEN OR YOU CAN LOSE SOMEONE VERY IMPORTANT TO YOU! Now... how is it?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by The grey raven (10-4-2004 - 07:41 PM)
by NirvanaGirl23 (10-4-2004 - 08:10 PM)
| this is like the best i have seen so far on this site! well, atleast i think so! i wish i could see you guys play it! hope to hear you on the radio soon!!!! |
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