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» Poem: Give up on it all!
Give up on it all!
written by Open_Until_4Am
12:41 AM 10/8/04
Loss of air in your lungs.
Try to take in all that you love.
Tell yourself your all alone.
Give up on just everything you know.

You tried and tried.
But now you feel like you've died.
Don't know what's left for you.
I told you before.
Give up on everything you know.

When you look around.
The people you've known your whole life.
Don't seem to stick around.
You had a feeling that this was going to happen.
Way before it ever did.
So ask yourself why.
Why you let in every lie?
Just give up.
Give up (x3)

You tried and you tried.
But now it feels like you've been dead all long.
Don't think there's anything left for you.
Like I told you.
Give up on everything you know.


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