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The Knife
written by NirvanaGirl23
07:58 PM 10/10/04
We fought for a couple hours,
The day seemed like it would never end.
We screamed at the top of our lungs,
to make sure we would be the loudest,
in the end.

but this gets us both no where.
till we run into our rooms.
find the knife to heal..
all of our wounds.

We come out of our rooms,
with bloodshot eyes,
all from crying, and stupid lies.
we stare into eachothers faces,
wondering went through our minds.
What was the fight about again?
i guess some stupid lie..


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I dunno...i just thought of some stuff and decided to write about it....LEAVE COMMENTS PLEASE!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by hells_angel (10-10-2004 - 08:07 PM)
awww! i like this poem but take me up on this...DONT CUT YURSELF! i kno how bad you want to and how much pain you have inside but cutting only takes it away for a slip second! when you come back to reality...all yur problems are still right were you left them! only YOU can amke your troubles go away and cutting isnt the way to go! trust me on this ok! im not trying to tell you what to do ok, i just dont want people going through what i did! all in all this is a good poem sweetie!

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