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» Poem: [ . i need you . ]
[ . i need you . ]
written by i_love_sandy
07:27 PM 10/13/04
I wish you were here in this nightmare with me.


If you were here, you could turn it back to a dream.


Back to the thing I used to adore, but


Now it's just sadness, hurt and gore.


Please just understand how you make me feel.


Although we don't talk much, I know that this is real.


When I see you, I feel really good.


Feel like I used to, just like I should.


You are my dreammaker, Chris.


Just your sweet voice brings me bliss.


I'm so glad you bother to say 'hi'.


And you, sweet Chris, are the most beautiful guy.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Hey, this is Cherry Bliss , the girl who defended i_love_sandy when you all insulted her. She killed herself due to depression and she passed her poems book to me so I could convey all of her thoughts and stuff to you all (not like you care ). But She tried to love you all and you all are bastards for hurting her the way you did and making it so she couldn't be around to see beyond the age of eleven.

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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (10-14-2004 - 12:08 AM)
o my god r u serious?! oh my god i'm so sorry, oh my god

by Trapezium (10-14-2004 - 03:32 PM)
when did she do it? all my fault...

by Death Fairy (10-15-2004 - 02:28 AM)
I havent been on this site that long, but I wish I could have done something to help her.

by Morbid Angel (10-15-2004 - 03:58 PM)
She actually done it? I don't believe that

by AriayeQuiteMad (10-15-2004 - 07:24 PM)
I've made a point of reading every single one of her poems, as well as every one of this 'kahno's poems, and I find myself filled with a revulsion I cannot express. Kahno... You're THIRTEEN!!! And you chastised her for saying she loved you at elevin? You disgust me, truly. I find myself praying that this is all just some ruse, that she's still alive out there, trying to put this all behind her. Elevin is far too young to die.

by Genocide Reaper (10-16-2004 - 07:14 PM)
I highly fucking doubt it. And if she did do it... Well, hey. She's got more guts then a lot of these people who posted tons upon tons of suicidal poems

by maledeth (10-17-2004 - 06:15 AM)
Let us all Rejoice to her untimely self-sacrifice to Danzig's "Going Down To Die!!!" Weep! Fucking Weep! Lies, heavenly lies.

by Mars_Phoenix (10-17-2004 - 01:24 PM)
lies....lies...lies....lies...lies *explodes*

by Lovely_Suicide (10-20-2004 - 10:47 AM)
MY FAULT! ALEX!!!!!!!!!!! IM GOING DOWN WITH YOU!!!! IM NOT GONNA TAKE THIS MY FAULT I SHOULD OF DID SOMETHING AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by Lovely_Suicide (10-20-2004 - 10:49 AM)
ALEX*WEEPS*wHY??? iT SHOULD OF BEEN ME SHOULD OF SHOULD OF ILL MAKE IT ME!! :(WHY? WHY? WHY? ITS ALL MY FAULT EVERYTHINGS MY FAULT I DESERVE TO BURN AND BURN AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! iTS ALL MY FAULT NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS NOT FAIR ITS NOT ITS NOT JUST TAKE ME IT SHOULD OF BEEN ME SHOULD OF AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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