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» Poem: This Breathe Is My Very Last
This Breathe Is My Very Last
written by insanebitch2000
11:38 AM 10/15/04
Standing Out In The Pouring Rain,
Shivering From The Cold.
My Tears Fall Down So Full Of Pain,
Depression Never Getting Old.

My Blackened Tears Are Washed Away,
Rain Licks Away My Blood.
Me I Shall Reveal Today,
Blood And Tears Start To Flood.

The Rain Weighs Down My Jet Black Wings,
Falling Feathers Touch The Floor.
In The Sky An Angel Sings,
As I Scream For Pain No More.

Her Touch Feels Like A Sudden Rush Of Pain,
My Nails Scratch Her China Face.
I Watch As Blood Seeps From Her Veins,
My Angel Fell From Her Grace.

Her Silver Blood Under My Nails,
Turns The Darkest Black.
My Each Attempt Of Screaming Fails,
Her Eyes Roll To The Back.

And Slowly As My Vision Clears,
I Stare At The Broken Face.
I Scream And Choke On My Own Tears,
That Angel Took My Place.

For Years I Have Waited For Death To Come,
Since All This Pain Did Begin.
But God I Am Afraid You Took The Wrong One,
Never Did That Angel Sin.

She Called Out So Soft To Me,
I Realize To Save My Soul.
She Tried To Stop Me Flying Free,
And Now It's Her You Stole.

The Pounding Rain Has Taken It's Toll,
I Fall To The Curb so Fast.
No Chance Now To Save My Soul,
This Breathe Is My Very Last...


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» Comments / Feedback
by ashevil (10-20-2004 - 10:06 AM)
................great stuff deep

by (anonymous) (10-20-2004 - 06:02 PM)
hey yur poems are really awesome thier all dark and i can really relate to the shit yu write so keep doing yur thing yur awesome

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