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» Poem: Cristians(beware may be offensive)
Cristians(beware may be offensive)
written by DontFearAConcequence
11:04 PM 10/19/04
God is a word
Spoken by most narrow minded ones
They believe in these rules
That prevents any fun
They must obey,
Or they believe they’ll go to hell
They try to spread their views
And put you under a spell
“If you don’t pray twice a week
And confess your sins
You’ll be damned
And get needles through your skin”
You’re supposed to love everyone
But it is them who bring hate
They accept difference,
But can’t take any change, in any way
They are all alike,
Each other they portray


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
dont bitch at me...

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» Comments / Feedback
by Makeshift-Suicide (10-20-2004 - 12:00 AM)
Hey. I like ur poems....they are kickass...Christians is the one that is the truest...

by DontFearAConcequence (10-20-2004 - 08:49 PM)
i am not gothic...i think you are very narrow minded for labeling me without seeing or talking to me beforehand...i deleted your comment lovely suicide, but thanks a bunches though...shows you just love me

by (anonymous) (10-25-2004 - 02:17 AM)
If anything you are the narrow minded one. Labeling every Christian without knowing anything about them. Nothing says that you have to pray or you go to hell. And before you ask, this is NOT a flame.

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