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Mutilate Me (new song for scarlet rain)
written by cryptic_misery09:14 PM 10/21/04Mutilate me
Tie me up and chain me down
Happiness is all I found
Bruise me
Mince me into pieces
I cannot believe what bliss this is
Cut across the veins of life
Make me your sacrifice
Mutilate me
Capture me in the abyss of night
Take off and take flight
Use me abuse me take me away!!!
Chorus:
Touch me hurt me
I can't feel anymore
Tease me show me
How you're going to mutilate me
Taunt me Haunt me
I want to take in more
Face me disgrace me
How will you mutilate me?
Mutilate me
Torture me, it's what I yearn
Teach me all that I can learn
Use me abuse me take me away!!!!
Chorus 2 times...
Mutilate me.....
Mutilate me......
Mutilate me...!!!!!! |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
woo our third song is done mofo's lmao
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| » Comments / Feedback | by NecroticFereak (10-21-2004 - 09:25 PM)
| oo so ur in a band or sumtin I would like to listen to this song u wrote its good! |
by NiteStalker (10-22-2004 - 05:11 AM)
| woah... "multilate me..." Now that's the word i loved in this song of yours... Pretty deep... So, are you in a punk bnd or metal band? or just keeping it underground/to yourself... |
by NiteStalker (10-22-2004 - 05:12 AM)
| woah... "multilate me..." Now that's the word i loved in this song of yours... Pretty deep... So, are you in a punk bnd or metal band? or just keeping it underground/to yourself... |
by no_oppurtunity_wasted (10-24-2004 - 03:28 AM)
| yay! i like it alot, its so deep keep doing what u guys do. = - ) |
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