» Poem: Left Alone |
Left Alone
written by bleedblack01:20 AM 10/26/04just kill me now
because i can't go on
you've left me here
so soon i'll be gone
i'll parish from this world
since you've left me alone
ever since you've been gone
i've been cutting to the bone
i needed you there
to help me through
but you've left me here
with nothing to do
everything i knew
taken away so fast
but i should have know
nothing ever lasts
so for now
i'll say my goodbye's
i hope someday i meet you
in the heavenly skies |
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this is about a friend dying ... it hasnt really happened to me and i hope it never will ... [ View bleedblack's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 379 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by lost_and_confused (10-26-2004 - 01:28 AM)
"just kill me now" thats a nice way to start a poem |
by nightrain030 (10-26-2004 - 01:49 AM)
Interesting poem. I liked it. |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-7-2004 - 07:47 PM)
"nothing ever lasts" true, that really makes me think, i found a friendship which has practically just gone down the drain, too good to be true and now its gone |
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