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» Poem: Left Alone
Left Alone
written by bleedblack
01:20 AM 10/26/04
just kill me now
because i can't go on
you've left me here
so soon i'll be gone
i'll parish from this world
since you've left me alone
ever since you've been gone
i've been cutting to the bone
i needed you there
to help me through
but you've left me here
with nothing to do
everything i knew
taken away so fast
but i should have know
nothing ever lasts
so for now
i'll say my goodbye's
i hope someday i meet you
in the heavenly skies


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is about a friend dying ... it hasnt really happened to me and i hope it never will ...

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» Comments / Feedback
by lost_and_confused (10-26-2004 - 01:28 AM)
"just kill me now" thats a nice way to start a poem

by nightrain030 (10-26-2004 - 01:49 AM)
Interesting poem. I liked it.

by bloodlyvalentine (11-7-2004 - 07:47 PM)
"nothing ever lasts" true, that really makes me think, i found a friendship which has practically just gone down the drain, too good to be true and now its gone

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