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» Poem: why do i still love you?
why do i still love you?
written by DontFearAConcequence
01:23 AM 10/26/04
You cheated on me
You broke my heart
You made me hurt
You ripped me apart

The day we met
I thought our hearts connected
I would have never guessed
How much I’d be affected

You were just another boyfriend
One that would come and go
But then our relationship changed
Our “love” began to grow

True love? Forever?
These thoughts I began to think of as true
Just as fast as we fell in “love”
The whole thing fell through

If you did all this
Why do I still love you so much?
I long for another kiss
I long for your tender touch

How do I get over you?
Will I ever forget the past?
Will the feelings ever go away?
Or will I hide them behind my mask?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
my ex boyfriend...ive never stopped caring for him and it hurts...i know others have had this problem...comment if you'd like

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» Comments / Feedback
by nightrain030 (10-26-2004 - 01:40 AM)
That's really sad. It was a really good poem though. I totally wish I could write like you. You know, to like express that emotion like that. I loved it.

by (anonymous) (11-2-2004 - 03:55 PM)
i know exactly how you feel my ex-girlfriend did the same to me...i would say good poem because it is but i understand how much it hurt ~pigmi

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