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At War
written by DontFearAConcequence01:54 AM 10/29/04at war within myself
at war throughout my peers
when I'm finally free from battle
back towards the hate and anger my life steers
I hate myself for all I'm worth
I can't stand the sight of my own reflection
even when I try my best
I analize my own work and find corrections
I always find my faults
I can never do anything right
I look too deep into my wrongs
within myself I'm in a constant fight
due to this internal fight
everyone wonders and stares
at night, I sit, alone, wondering
who worries about me, who really cares?
trying to be better, trying to have more
it's a constant battle between me and my friends
this war is so frequent it's almost constant
it seems to go on forever without an end
IM IN THIS WAR WITHOUT MERCY
SOMEONE PLEASE SET ME FREE |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
just more ramblings that were going on in my mind
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