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» Poem: Goodbye (i promise)
Goodbye (i promise)
written by Lovely_Suicide
09:17 AM 10/29/04
Goodbye i promise i will cry everynight

Goodbye i promise i will lose the fight

Goodbye i promise i will remember you

Goodbye i promise i will make you my tattoo

Goodbye i promise i will keep my heart broken

Goodbye i promise i will let things go unspoken

Goodbye i promise i will never let go

Goodbye i promise i will not let my hidden feelings
show

Goodbye i promise i will cry a million tears

Goodbye i promise i will bleed threw these years

Goodbye i promise i will always be waiting

Goodbye i promise i will always be hating

Goodbye i promise i will believe my fantasy lies

Goodbye i promise i will make sure this never dies

Goodbye i promise i will die

Goodbye i promise i will never ask 'why?'

Goodbye i promise i will wait for your reply

Goodbye i promise i will never get to see you again

Goodbye i promise i will hang by this chain

Goodbye i promise this is goodbye.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
that's about a guy i liked

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» Comments / Feedback
by i_love_sandy (10-30-2004 - 08:08 PM)
awww how sad . i know how that feels. dont die*hugs*

by (anonymous) (11-9-2004 - 11:15 AM)
i am everyday sucidal too.... just like you... i hope you can e-mail me: silverstone_04@yahoo.com.... let's die together!!!!!!

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