» Poem: do you love me? |
do you love me?
written by devil-dick01:35 PM 10/30/04do you love me yes or no?
please tel me before i turn and go
i really need to know.
do you love me yes or no?
or is your heart as cold as snow
your love never seems to show
is your love just a game?
when your heart breaks, you push the blame
does every relationship have to be the same
is your love just words and a lie?
will you love me till the day i die
or will i be changed quicker than a tie
my love for you is never ending
all my life with you i hope to be spending
if your love is true, then why is it bending
your love is all i ever wanted to keep
your more interesting than fluffy sheep
the day you leave, it'l be hard not to weep
your love is all i need
your penitrated my heart and made it bleed
ill be your night riding on a galloping steed
my love wil always show
the more is ee you the more it'l grow
so i thought i'd let you know
my love will pump through my heart
from my body, it'l never part
our love is beautiful, it might as well be art
my love for you is forever true
when im not with you i feel blue
the big question is; do you love me like i love you? |
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» Comments / Feedback | by DutifulAngel (10-30-2004 - 01:37 PM)
by (anonymous) (10-30-2004 - 02:57 PM)
by (anonymous) (10-30-2004 - 03:18 PM)
*gasp!* ^_____^ That was great!
O.o sheep? amusing... |
by chaos_in_flames213 (10-30-2004 - 09:03 PM)
very good. I like it lots |
by genuinely_fake (10-31-2004 - 01:18 PM)
that is some gay shit maan
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by (anonymous) (11-24-2004 - 04:41 PM)
fuck off genuinely_fake just cause you can't write poems that good! i love this poem just like the other ones! keep it up! |
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