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unfinished..
written by lost_cause08:58 PM 11/4/04There's no one she can talk to
No one to confide in
No way she can get rid of
All this pain and sin
She is stuck in her own hell
As the blood runs down her arms
She wishes she had someone
Who didn't cause her harm
And she starts smiling
(Cause she knows she's alone)
And she starts crying
(Because no ones on that phone)
She sits in misery to show them what they've done
The smile she is showing is her own invented pun
They see her pain and scars
They still don't give a fuck
She thinks they need to die
She thinks this world sucks
And she starts smiling
(Cause she knows she's all alone)
And she starts crying
(I HAVE NO HOME!) |
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More of a song... It sucks... It's not done..
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Xx Tsuki xX (11-4-2004 - 09:07 PM)
| WOW!!! It is really good and it doesn't suck! I hope you will write more songs. You should also try poetry! |
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