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Your eyes.
written by NirvanaGirl2311:31 PM 11/4/04I want to know,
what runs through your mind.
Are there thoughts of me?
Or thoughts like mine?
I glanced at you,
and caught your eye.
I wondered if,
you meant to try.
I looked away,
My heart felt numb.
i felt like i would,
fall one someone.
I glanced again,
to take a chance.
You did too,
you lost your chance.
you look away,
and i gave up.
So whats on your mind?
And whats on mine? |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by emotikon (11-4-2004 - 11:35 PM)
| keep trying
you'll do fine if you keep on trying |
by butterflyeffect (11-4-2004 - 11:36 PM)
| I like your poem. It's something simple, yet says so much. Good job! |
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