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I'll do the same 2 u
written by Lovely_Suicide05:41 AM 11/5/04Love me and you will be saved
Hate me and you will die
Tell the truth to me;i will spoil you
Feed me lies;i will punish you
Save your soul let me talk to you
Condamn you soul totally ingore me
Spread a smile over a plastic face
Spread some tears down a mutilated face
Be nice to me and i will be nice to you
Be mean to me and i will be mean to you. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
simple its so simple
but lame
wateva
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| » Comments / Feedback | by dacode05 (11-5-2004 - 05:59 AM)
| not lame...ur getting passionate...not so lowly so...very good... |
by (anonymous) (11-5-2004 - 04:57 PM)
| No, no. You're right. It IS lame. |
by (anonymous) (11-16-2004 - 12:55 PM)
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