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Cutting
written by ieatsmellysocks07:54 PM 11/11/04Came home from school and closed the door
Got out a needle and sat on the floor
Wiped away a tear as it started to bleed
Lowered my mouth to drink the blood that i need
Got blood on my t-shirt got blood everywhere
Im helpless and pathetic and no one seems to care
Writing doesnt help anymore
Ive tried to stop so many times before... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Schizophrenic_broken (11-11-2004 - 08:09 PM)
by dreamlost (11-11-2004 - 08:27 PM)
| thats an awesome friggin poem..really really good writing..ur awesome..nice poem =) |
by (anonymous) (11-11-2004 - 08:36 PM)
| Hey..I was just passing through and my god, I fricking love your poem! I wish I could write like you, and some people in the world..but I cant! It'll be the death of me! Haha but yeah, great poem! |
by whysouldicare5162 (11-12-2004 - 01:14 AM)
| your poem rock's! do u cut cause i kinda just once and a while |
by The Goddess of Mutilation (11-12-2004 - 01:20 AM)
| Great poem but let me give u a tip on cutting, needles don't hurt as much as blades and matches do |
by bleeder (11-12-2004 - 01:53 AM)
| sounds like me pretty much cept you forgot bout the emotional bleekness that drives you to do it |
by .::forbidden::. (11-15-2004 - 09:05 PM)
| hell yeh that was a friggen awsome poem i wish i could write like u too ! |
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