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» Poem: Love's Sweet Fantasy
Love's Sweet Fantasy
written by insanebitch2000
01:34 PM 11/15/04
It?s raining hard as we arrived at the park.
In our wildest desires today we?ll embark.
The time of our lives we?ll have this fine day.
As the true meaning of passion today we?ll display.
With your back to a tree we have a passionate kiss,
This blissful sweet moment we will reminisce.
The rain keeps on pouring while we start to make out.
On this beautiful morning our love?s all about.
Our lips make sweet love as we now caress.
Your deepest desires to me you confess.
Confess you do, and a confession you tell me,
To open your heart, and then keep the key.
A delicate look, the look in your eyes.
I nibble your neck and as I now hold your thighs.
Right up to your ear, I nibble some more,
I then hit your spot; you now start to soar.
Your jaw drops open, you then bite your lip.
With one hand on your neck, and one on your hip,
I listen intently, as you now gasp for air.
You grin in delight, and whisper it?s not fair.
We?re now drenched in water, such sweet satisfaction.
You now run in the rain, oh what a reaction.
Happiness exudes from all that is you,
The most joyful of moments, and it?s just us two.
I catch up to you, and give you a hug.
We fall to the ground; we go on to snug.
You get right on top, as you now straddle me.
My wildest desires you start to set free.
You nuzzle my nose, and then lick my lips.
I want you now closer; I pull you from the hips.
Our bodies so close that I feel your heart beat.
My heart feeling yours now makes me complete.
The rain and the mist make this such a delight.
Our flames of pure passion now can?t help but ignite.
You take off your shirt, as I now take off mine.
After I take off your bra, I then kiss what is fine.
After kissing your breasts, you give me the sexiest smile.
The expression on your face has made it worthwhile.
That look in the face exudes the purest of wild,
As I keep kissing your breasts you keep getting more riled.
Biting your lips, you can?t help anymore,
The feeling of pleasure that you so dearly adore.
Engulfed with enticement you push me slightly down.
In the most passionate kiss we now start to drown.
I roll over you; right now I?m on top.
You will feel the pleasure even after I stop.
First, I peck light kisses all over your chest.
Then I drag my tongue on each of your breasts.
I lick them all slowly, as I kiss them completely.
You gasp in delight as you craved for this deeply.
Your fingers run to my head, and then grasp it intently.
While you caress my hair, I kiss your tummy gently.
With your hands on my head, you want it so bad.
You looked filled with desire, and of that I am glad.
I now take off your jeans, while the rain keeps on pouring.
Every inch of your body I will not be ignoring.
I kiss your bare legs, as I left on your thong,
My lips have a place, and on you they belong.
Being with you while we?re still in the rain,
Is even way better than when we were in the train.
You try to kiss me, but I stop you this time.
As you bite on my fingers, I go for what is sublime
You hands guide me lower as my whispers allure,
Your deepest of cravings which are erotically pure.
I drag my tongue closer to what is exotic.
I take off your thong, as you are fully erotic.
I go for those lips as they crave for the pleasure,
That I will give them, as I now please my treasure.
I drag my tongue slowly, and then start going fast.
Your juices start flowing, as they all were amassed.
I slide my tongue deep as you now start to moan,
This pleasure you feel always has been unknown.
Pleasing you has been my number one goal.
You grab hold of my head as I?m making you whole.
You keep pleading for more as I?m hitting your spot.
This pleasure you feel is so spicy and hot.
You now start to cum as your hips start shake.
You?re arching your back, and I know it?s not fake.
Your legs clamp to my head, as you?re almost now done.
You gasp your sweet nothings, as your mind has been spun.
The sun starts to set, but the rain has not stopped.
At the end of that pleasure, your jaw had been dropped.
Now you take off my pants and throw them to the side.
Then you take off my boxers as we?re now being eyed.
We really don?t care, so we keep carrying on,
You get right on top, as new thoughts start to spawn.
With your hands on my shoulders you now start to ride,
The pleasure we feel echoes deeply inside.
Our love?s being made right now at sunset,
The sun keeps on setting as we now start to sweat.
In the rapture of rhythm that brings us to ecstasy,
Our souls make sweet love and now attain harmony.
The rain pours now harder as you moan and you cry,
As we keep making love on this night in July.
Orgasmic perfection is attained at this time,
As our minds are in heaven as they now intertwine.
I dreamt of this moment since the day that we met.
This moment in life I will never regret.
You?re a perfect red rose, an Angel from above.
You?re the love of my life, and you define love.


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» Comments / Feedback
by ToRnAtThEsEaMs (11-15-2004 - 04:30 PM)
holy shit... that was awesome

by (anonymous) (11-15-2004 - 07:14 PM)
This was the best poem that I've ever heard. you done a great job. I really like it very much

by (anonymous) (11-15-2004 - 09:34 PM)
What an amazing poem...truly moving!! Was fabulous...if speaking from experience ur one lucky dude!

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