» Poem: Black Wings and a Golden Halo |
Black Wings and a Golden Halo
written by darktinkerbell09:58 PM 11/15/04Good and evil clash
with thoughts of my future and my past
I would love to make myself believe
I am all good
like I convince everyone else
but everytime I try to push away my evil
it fights back,
everytime I push away my good
it fights back
I look at my reflection
and I see how confused I really am
I see a lost teenage girl
with a golden halo
with black wings
trying to live up to an image
that is nothing how she really is....
and she's so confused...
not knowing who she really is....
staring at her reflection....
looking at her
Black Wings and her Golden Halo |
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I don't think this poem is that good, not one of my best [ View darktinkerbell's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 410 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by fallen_rose (11-15-2004 - 10:28 PM)
it's wonderful. i love it. |
by Makeshift-Suicide (11-16-2004 - 12:15 AM)
HEY...,i love it, it reminds me, of well,,me...HIT ME BACK....Kittie |
by animegurrl222 (11-16-2004 - 02:33 AM)
OMFG!!!! this is the best poem ive read on here...so awesome ;) |
by djfoe2003 (11-16-2004 - 04:50 AM)
suprisingly enough it reminds me of me (in the guy way) lost and confused with a little of both sides dark and light i wish my black wings would turn golden :( |
by IceBound (11-16-2004 - 03:46 PM)
the false image comsumes you,
i know |
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