» Poem: loving you |
loving you
written by lost_cause12:25 AM 11/16/04You hurt me more than you help me
Your always bringing me down
I don't know why I try so hard
To keep you so close around
There's so many things you do
I know you don't try to hurt me
But I still can't help but think
That you want to make me bleed
I don't care if you love me
I don't care if you don't
I sure as hell know one thing
Accept this love I won't |
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» Comments / Feedback | by DevilKisses4u (11-16-2004 - 12:34 AM)
actually i thik its AWESOME!! its coolieness. keep writing. *Heather* |
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