» Poem: Love never felt so strong. |
Love never felt so strong.
written by NirvanaGirl2310:05 PM 11/16/04I'm happy that all my feelings are gone.
I never knew love felt so strong.
But it disapeared and i feared. from love.
But they left for someone new.
And that someone might be you.
Cause everything feels right.
And my love feels new and ripe. |
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Ummm....Leave comments, U2U's, tell me my poems suck? i dont know, just leave comments. thanks! [ View NirvanaGirl23's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 379 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (12-17-2004 - 01:04 AM)
Hey I am going though your poems and It looks like you need a comment:) I thnk your poems are really good so far.. Bye bye Your avid reader Josh, Slacker |
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