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truth be told me you hold
written by i_love_sandy12:59 AM 11/19/04my life will soon come to an end but it wont if you wont go
and if you leave you soon will see my real blood in my head will show
so hold me once i hope for twice and you will find the one
and you my dear see no fear in me my wonderful Sean
My dear you'll see the truth can be that i'm your only one
and my one dont you be gone by the time the years are done |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
ah sean buddy, such a good friend. dont comment unless you have something nice to say!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (11-19-2004 - 05:14 AM)
| You ripped me off! Theif!!!! |
by Trapezium (11-19-2004 - 04:54 PM)
by SilverlineKai (11-24-2004 - 09:45 AM)
| Your ability of writing is like a premature ejaculators version of sex.
1) a 30second flop
2) Pathetically useless
3) This is a good one, I believe it is SHIT! |
by Trapezium (11-24-2004 - 09:48 AM)
| Oh dear, it seems like no one listens to a bitch. |
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