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» Poem: New feelings.
New feelings.
written by NirvanaGirl23
01:17 AM 11/20/04
I will lay here thinking of you.
I will lay here dreaming too.
I rewind and rewind.
As i play that part over and over.

But i feel like dirt. and theres nothing to do.
PLease dont hurt. I wont move.
Dont fast forward, cause its all gonna be blue.
Please rewind, cause theres memories of you.

....

I think i'm almost over you.
But you never know (you never knew).
Every thoughts about you..
But now they're going (now they're gone).
I used to be missing you.
But now i am feeling (now i am true).

I never felt so willing, to try something new.
I never felt so daring, to let go of you.
I have no one now, but i am staying true.


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by RenagadeAngel (11-20-2004 - 01:23 AM)
I like it!

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