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The Necromancer
written by KaoticKitty8709:16 PM 11/23/04He killed his love
twas accident he swore
her soul rests above
while he studies ancient lore
he vowed to bring her back
he failed many times
the ingredients he lacked
and all the proper lines
then late one night, it was full moon
he finally suceeded
he found his doom
he spawned her zombie
her spirit disturbed
she spoke "You Never Loved Me"
for awakening, she was perturbed
he tried to show his love
though it was in vain
she ripped out his heart
and devoured his brain |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by fuzzypunkhat (11-23-2004 - 11:14 PM)
| Omg I love it. Wonderfully done. ^.^ I know this is stupid but a lot of people don't get to reply to my comments, if you want just look on the opposite side of the poetry of the poetry portal and look for fuzzypunkhat, or under 71 poems, that's how many I wrote. Or you can U2U me. ^.^ Wonderful poem, I love how you collided the words so wonderfully together |
by drowninginmyblood (11-23-2004 - 11:54 PM)
| oooh...I really like it! It's true, you can't bring back the dead, it's meant to be...something bad will happen to them or you. Very interesting. Awsome poem, keep writing. |
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