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» Poem: After thoughts
After thoughts
written by KaoticKitty87
07:37 PM 11/24/04
As I sit her contemplating
the way of my demise
I wonder if they ever loved me
wondered if they though me wise
or did they think me dumb
for ending my own life

my body is now covered in mud
but is life all it seems?
death is the only way out
it makes perfect sense to me
so why do people debate it
they think its a crime
life and death are fated
does it matter what time?

people are angry, others sad
but it doesnt change how I feel
I hate that I made people mad
but my past is unchanged still
I hate the way they paved
the way to my death
I hate the way they say
they knew me best


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» Comments / Feedback
by slaya (11-24-2004 - 09:45 PM)
I totally feel the same way that the poem has stated, and i really like how that was written...

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