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Pick up the pieces. THen break your back
written by NirvanaGirl2311:33 PM 11/24/04Laugh at my life.
But its better then yours.
Complain about everything,
That you do.
Tell me I'm worthless.
To lift yourself up.
But all the while, you cant find your love.
Pick up the pieces.
to the puzzle you broke.
Exit the entrance.
With a frown and no luck |
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i dunno. Leave comments please. i think this site is Anti-comment now?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by lifexlovexluck (11-24-2004 - 11:36 PM)
| really good! i like how you compared insecurity to a puzzle. am i right? is that what you did? hopefully...good job-LLL |
by MidnightToker257 (12-25-2004 - 05:18 AM)
| I really liked your poem, it really spoke to me, and I like your name, NIRVANA kicks it, in the ass |
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