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dont read this, its just strong words
written by lovely_death_pain_cute06:50 PM 11/25/04love is just a drop,
a drop of blood inside.
people go in and out of sight,
of the lives you dryed with tears.
you keep crying,
you keep trying.
but nothing comes out,
nothing but the clumsey words
of pain in each tear.
you told me your secreats,
you told me lies.
you told me everything that i thought was the truth.
you just stood there cold and down,
as i was there, cold and broken.
i told you once before,
you didnt listen, you didnt care.
so i say good bye,
never come back.
cuz im bleeding through my skin,
dieing to hear,
the real you |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by tortured_goth_4life (11-25-2004 - 06:57 PM)
| wow...those are strong...keep writing...you really good |
by psycopathic_juggalette420 (11-25-2004 - 11:38 PM)
| thats really good, u should keep writing, they are really strong words, and i feel just like that all the time. |
by xxtorturedsoulxx (11-26-2004 - 01:52 AM)
| that was awesome. it really showed your strong point in poetry. the words were so strong |
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