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» Poem: Cutting Sorrow
Cutting Sorrow
written by KaoticKitty87
08:42 PM 11/26/04
I should say Im sorry, for all the trouble I have caused
I should say Im sorry, Im sorry because
I always let you down
I always seemed to frown
I never seemed too glad
always very sad
I rarely made you proud
my music was always too loud
I never did much right
always looked for a fight
I always seemed to make you mad
you always threatened to send me to dad
you always made me cry
now I will stab out my eyes, as I say my goodbye
you never noticed the cuts
they were always visible, seen them you must
why did you never say anything
did the truth sting?
it made me feel like you didnt care
I never cut too deep, I was too scared
I want you to know, you pushed me to it
everytime you threw a fit
you pushed me close and closer to the end
over the edge, you did send
this time I will cut deep
and send myself into eternal sleep


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yet another about my mom

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» Comments / Feedback
by persistent-cutter (11-26-2004 - 08:47 PM)
Great poem, I feel exactly the same way about my mother!

by Slipknot_drummer_chick (11-27-2004 - 03:47 AM)
Amazing poem. Do not cut yourself though, I have for 3 years now, its not worth it. I ahve survived by a thread 12 times. Im finnaly stopping. Believe me recovery is not easy, but the best time to start would be now. Dont wait until your so close to death you can feel it breathing down your throat.

by (guest) (3-17-2005 - 04:06 PM)
that was really good. i can really relate to it cause thats how me and my mom are i love her and that swhy i cut. i tried to stop but thats the only thing i know to do that will get out my anger as i sit and cry doing it i wanna dye and i think i should cause i have nothing to give anyone and now my boyfriend knows i cut and he's babying me cause he doesnt want me to do it and i want people to treat me like a real person. i dont know what to do any more

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