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» Poem: As I Close My Eyes, I Feel It Slip Away
As I Close My Eyes, I Feel It Slip Away
written by devils angel 13
02:29 PM 11/27/04
As I close my eyes,
I feel it all slip away,
All the words you say,
All the games you play...

I wake up in the morning,
I stare into your eyes,
I see your just like other guys,
I wanna ask a million whys...

I dont understand you,
As you yell and make me blue,
I can see right through you,
You aint glad, your sad...

I finally make it
Through the day,
And then I close my eyes,
And feel it all slip away...


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truth can be told in horrid messures...

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by freak (11-27-2004 - 07:09 PM)
your poem was really good

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