» Poem: Confused.... why? |
Confused.... why?
written by Firequeen08:26 PM 12/3/04I look in the mirror, what is it I see?
past or future, what may it be?
All thoose words I have spoken, the tears i have cried
What made them? an empty mind? cause i don't regognice what i have lied.
I touch my cheack, is it really there?
Kiss of air I fare.
But solid something i do sence, a part of the prison around my mind.
Why am I trapped in this body? Who are theese peaple around me? They are not of my kind.
Is this the place where I am supposed to be?
It cannot be, cause here I am anything but free.
The eyes are the mirror of the sould they say, but all I see is a frozen darkness.
From where is it comming? The light thoose men tould me was in them? Theese eyes my soul depress.
This is not me,
the girl I see.
But where am I than?
This I don't understand. |
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Not really poem, more of a try of understanding myself, well let me know what u think anyway. [ View Firequeen's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 351 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by Briteny14 (12-3-2004 - 09:43 PM)
I Really love your poem it has a certian flow to it and i love these kinds of poems any way. |
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