» Poem: I just wish I was okay |
I just wish I was okay
written by DarkAngelBlood04:34 PM 6/14/04How do you hurt me, when you're so far away?
Howcome it takes a lifetime to forget you?
But to love you, it only takes one day?
These feelings I have make no sense at all.
Every way I try to get you outta my mind.
Every time I try so hard,
But all I can remember is how you broke my heart.
The pain is embedded in my brain,
I bet you're still feeling the same.
I bet you've already forgotten my name.
And again, I just wish I was okay.
You're out there in a different city,
I'm still stuck in the same old town.
Everything we ever did is coming back around.
I wish you could feel this too now.
So you could feel how I felt a year ago.
And then you'll understand this pain I know.
I've come face to face with my worst enemy.
I hold you even closer than before.
You know you're my worst memory,
Cause you just left me on the floor.
And again, I just wish I was okay. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (6-20-2004 - 12:12 AM)
woah.. I realllllly relate to this poem.. and I'm thinking about getting one of these [I'm looking for a site to put my poetry on..even though it's not near as good as yours.. mine's just thoughts jumbled.. but I like it..it doesn't have a real format.. just thoughts.. I sucked even more when I tried to rhyme and stuff..] but anyways, I think it'd be nice to get to know you or something.. and if you wouldn't mind, could I put this on my greatestjournal? I'll put it on private.. and I'll give you all the credit, I just really like it and relate.. especially right now.. but anyways, it'd be fun to get to know you so if you want and you have aim.. im me at trnpprdll.. or msn at theusedtwinkie@hotmail.com.. I have yahoo but I don't use it much.. so I'd say if you don't have either of those.. email me at theusedtwinkies@yahoo.com.. otherwise yeah.. hrm.. This is probably really weird for you.. It's kinda weird for me.. I've only read like 3 of your poems so far.. but I'm def putting this as a favorites site and reading more of your poetry.. ahh. *falls over* Okay yeah.. I'm gonna goo.. hope to year from you. By the way, my name's Rebecca..nobody really calls me that.. except for family and like.. adults I'm not close with. *Shrug* uhh yeah, I think that's enough scaring you for now.. |
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