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There She Lies, Broken Inside
written by darktinkerbell08:26 PM 12/16/04Heart torn
soul lost
she's broken inside
lonely love songs,
crying herself to sleep
lying on upon the floor
is she asleep now?
have her cries faded
or have be blocked out the sound?
this house screams it's silence
and whispers it's worries
the walls bleed,
the blood black.......
and in her room,
staring at the never-ending celing
there she lies
broken inside |
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This Poem Kinda sux, but oh well
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Morbid Angel (12-16-2004 - 08:28 PM)
by Trapezium (12-16-2004 - 08:41 PM)
by trulybroken57 (12-16-2004 - 09:09 PM)
| itsa good poem, but it kinda makes me think avril wannab |
by Morbid Angel (12-16-2004 - 09:11 PM)
| Morby and Kahno play the word game! |
by blackened_rose (12-16-2004 - 10:26 PM)
| This kinda makes me think of Avril Lavigne, but manely because of the title, other wise, it's a really pretty peom. You expressed your point really well in it. :) ~Kath |
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