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Dad it's over
written by cryptic_misery11:55 PM 6/18/04| I can't remember too much about him now. He's a lost memory that I can't figure out. He says he don't want me but I can't see how. A missing piece is the puzzle to plow. He treats me like shit and I don't know why. He used to love me and he taught me to fly. Higher and higher I reached the sky. I could see the mischeif and anger in his eyes. I could hold his heart in the palm of my hand. There is no exit to this blood filled land.I blu up last night right out of the blue. Dad you make me feel like I could kill you. Man I swear to god I fucking HATE YOU!!! |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Guess who this is to....no dumb shit not my sister's cousin. CUZ THAT'S MY COUSIN TO. MY DAD YOU DUMB ASS
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (6-20-2004 - 08:13 PM)
| damn dood..that was realy good...
i think it will mean a lot to ppl who dont have dads...or have shitty ones |
by yomamma (6-21-2004 - 04:46 AM)
| that was good *claps* sounded like a speech i should give to my step-dad very well done |
by SyntheticBeauty (6-24-2004 - 05:20 AM)
| Extremely well-done. I didn't like my father either. Great job. Sounds somewhat like a rap, but knowing you, it most certainly isn't. ;oP |
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