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Razor Kissed Wrists
written by fuzzypunkhat01:29 AM 12/20/04I put on my burgendy dress,
I ran the hot water,
I was not more, yet no less.
I left the candles burn,
Beside the steaming bath,
Soon I would let them learn.
I sat in the tub in doubt,
I began to cry looking back,
Those memories had brought my pout.
The candles flame danced so sweet,
Collided ember to make me wonder,
If I my life should I keep.
I picked up the razor yet hesitantly,
Should I do it or not,
Because I let you step all over me.
I just let my emotions loose,
I didn't scream or yell,
But anyone could see the sorrow from the roof.
My arms were red with the lipstick from razor kissed,
My tears uncontrollably rolling,
Lipstick from the shoulders, right down to the wrists. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
The lipstick is blood okay? :) It's my little metaphor or whatever...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Maniac68 (12-20-2004 - 04:58 PM)
| Amazing Poem.... U2U Sometime |
by wounded_angel (12-21-2004 - 03:13 PM)
| That's a really good poem...I can relate cuz I was very suicidal after my mom died. |
by (anonymous) (12-21-2004 - 07:50 PM)
| Its really real to me , i know how you feel cuz i have the same addiction. |
by TearzOfBlood (12-22-2004 - 10:04 AM)
| love the poem you really send a good message im addicted to
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by (anonymous) (12-23-2004 - 09:02 AM)
| I WAS ADDICTED TO THIS I JUST WANTED TO SAY PLEASE BE CAREFUL FOR PEOPLE READING THIS IT MAY BE A TEMTATION FOR THEM. |
by (anonymous) (12-24-2004 - 07:08 AM)
| i like it a lot. Razor kisses nice uses of words...... |
by scaredeyes (12-24-2004 - 06:27 PM)
| its a rad poem i really like it keep writing |
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