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» Poem: I feel nothing
I feel nothing
written by lost_cause
10:09 PM 12/21/04
I don't have any words to describe how I now feel.
I suppose I feel the same about you; just different about the situation.
You could say that I am sad, shocked, angry, or even okay with what you did to me.
So I'm nothing to you...
I still can't describe how I feel with any of those words.
What you did to me hurts, and yet I have no resentment towards you.
I also feel no pity for myself.
I feel nothing.
It amuses me how things that would normally do something to someone do nothing to me.
How I can just sit here and feel empty like always.
You didn't change who I am or how I feel.
The pain I am in right now is indescribable.
And yet I feel nothing.
I am crying but I don't feel sad.
I am screaming and I'm not mad.
I feel nothing.
Numb to the thing you have done to me I sit here.
Alone but not lonely.
Hurt but not feeling.
I feel nothing.


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by *crimson*tears* (12-22-2004 - 01:39 AM)
i like it. and i can relate to it.

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