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» Poem: Bye but not for long
Bye but not for long
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
07:49 PM 12/23/04
I know that it's been comming I could feel it in my heart.
It was obvious to both of us it was time to be apart.
Though we care about eachother so strongly and so dearly. You would have to be blind to see our love is gone, it was all shown so clearly.
The signs came poppin in and out every where I went.
I had to get this over with, but don't worry there's no replacement.
We are just closer being friends then anything else we could be.
It's not completely over though because there's still a you and me.
A you and me as friends, with a bond that will always remain strong
So even though we're not together it's only bye, but not for long.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I am saying bye to him (NOT GOODBYE

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» Comments / Feedback
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (12-23-2004 - 07:50 PM)
Please leave comments! Thanks a tons! -Cassy

by Trapezium (12-27-2004 - 09:10 PM)
It's good, I like the originality, I've never actually seen a poem like this. Well done.

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