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My Road Of Broken Dreams (please read)
written by devils angel 1303:01 PM 12/24/04Walking down this road,
Of all my broken dreams,
Nothing is ever,
Quite at it seems...
The dreams of the past,
And my faraway hopes,
Some people would say,
I was much of a dope.
Why did i keep trying,
As I cried late at night,
Hopes, and dreams....
They filled me with fright.
There is nothing to do...
There is nothing to say...
As a walk down this road...
On this cold winter day.... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
maybe i got the idea of writing this poem from the greenday song....but it isnt the exact words...so yeah. this is my thoughsts.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by MidnightCurse (12-24-2004 - 03:07 PM)
| nice! My life is filled with broken dreams...
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by Angel_IN_Hell (12-24-2004 - 03:08 PM)
| I think it is GREAT it reminds me of my favorite song my Good Charolette |
by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (12-24-2004 - 07:57 PM)
| its really good it kinda reminds me of S.O.S. by GC |
by xDarkxDreamerx (12-24-2004 - 10:20 PM)
| Good Poem. My Life Is Full Of Broken Dreams .. |
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