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She's been watchin me forever...
written by cryptic_misery06:06 AM 6/22/04Little girl In my head.
Looking like she's almost dead
Sitting there i watch here stare
Red in her eyes and blood in her hair
I'm in the field and I am watching her
From a distance she looks much prettier
A bed of roses separates our space
so then i start running, at a very strong pace
Every step i take a roses will die
Closer and closer i see her red eyes
As I get up to her she turns so pale
Fragile as ever her body will fail
I ask her, what's wrong? what do you want from me?
She starts to speak, but she just stares at me
Over and over this dream it will come
She's been watchin me forever....i'm clueless, i'm done. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
SHE IS IN MY HEAD BUT I DONT KNOW WHAT SHE WANTS FROM ME. IF SUMONE CAN HELP ME PLEASE DO. E-MAIL ME PLEASE PIZZABOOB7@YAHOO.COM. NOT IN CAPS.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by sonumbed (6-22-2004 - 11:40 PM)
| i like this poem because it flows so well... |
by SyntheticBeauty (6-24-2004 - 05:17 AM)
| It does flow wonderfully. And I have had a similar dream. Beautiful job. |
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