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unwanted dreams
written by trulybroken5710:33 PM 12/27/04unwanted dreams
stream from my
lonely heart
forming tears
at the base of
my already saddened eyes.
they haunt me
day and night
and i will
never forget the
harshness
of the words
that were said.
i want nothing more
than to have
a dream
that doesn't leave me
in tears.
yet i still have
all these
unwanted dreams
that will not,
and cannot
ever go away |
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» Comments / Feedback | by hopeleSSlydevoted (12-27-2004 - 10:46 PM)
thats an awesome poem....you've got talent :) |
by someoneelse (12-30-2004 - 07:12 PM)
i like your style of poetry. maybe you should try making songs. |
by someoneelse (12-30-2004 - 07:13 PM)
i like your style of poetry. maybe you should try making songs. |
by Foiazzy (12-30-2004 - 09:29 PM)
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