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Tragic Love
written by KaoticKitty8707:07 PM 12/28/04bitter love and bleeding hearts
foolish pride has its start
defiled truth, denied itself
trust layed to rest on a shelf
their souls drift apart
as their love departs
embittered sin wins again
as their anger overcomes them
they kill each other, rest in peace
may their souls find release |
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» Comments / Feedback | by Absolution (12-28-2004 - 07:15 PM)
I love it, especially the first two lines, bitter love and bleeding hearts
foolish pride has its start,
Good job :D |
by Genocide Reaper (1-2-2005 - 10:23 PM)
by XxEvil_princessxX (1-4-2005 - 09:35 PM)
Love It...Means Alot To Me.. |
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