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» Poem: Split
Split
written by cryptic_misery
11:31 PM 12/29/04
I created this world
And everything in it
{Just to get away from myself
Just to get away from you} whispers
When I get lost inside
And there's no way out of it
{I feel like I am the best
I feel like I am the worst}
And I am the only one....
{Who understands nothing
Who understands everything}
I look at this creation
From a deprived imagination
And although I should relate to everything inside
{I remain clueless
I remain helpless}
It hurts
And I am numb...

(chorus)

Hold me close
And let me go
Show me nothing
So all will be known
Take the punch
And throw no hit
Watch us now, watch us...
Split

I created this world
And everything in it
{Just to leave me here
Just to leave you here}
When I get lost inside
And there's no way out of it
{I feel like I'm not seen
I feel like I'm not heard}
And I am the only one...
{Who sees everything you say
Who hears everything you show}
I feel this lost sensation
Is true common isolation
And although this is the place where I don't have to hide
{I stay hidden
I stay forbidden}
It hurts
And I am numb
So can you...

Hold me close
And let me go
Show me nothing
So all will be known
Take the punch
And throw no hit
Watch us now, watch us...
Split

Split apart
You break away from my heart
You left me here
Alone to die from fear
I can't go on with you around
{I can't go on without you now}
I don't know how I got this way
But you've split away from ME!!!!! {sung as may}

{softly}
Hold me close
And let me go...
Show me nothing..
So "all" this will be known
Take the punch, and throw no hit...
Watch us now.....
{background whisper} watch us split}

{pause then come in screaming}

HOLD ME CLOSE AND LET ME GO...
SHOW ME NOTHING
SO ALL WILL BE KNOWN
TAKE THE PUNCH
AND THROW NO HIT
WATCH US NOW
WATCH US NOW
AND WATCH US
{BIG SCREAM} SPLIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

{fade out} .


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by Death Fairy (12-31-2004 - 03:05 AM)
i really like it

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