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untitled ( plz read and send mess. back)
written by Psychoace04:00 AM 12/30/04The pain that once was in me,
Is now the hatred you see,
Now you can no longer be,
You punished me tell i gave,
You hid my soul in a mental state of cave... |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by BlackVengence (12-30-2004 - 04:45 AM)
| it's short and nice, but i know it has some kind of hidden meaning. i like it. read mine...moneo tu. i think it's good |
by _Anything_to_be_Loved_ (1-11-2005 - 01:09 AM)
| well really nice poem. but it still sucks that you said (please read & send mess back) and theres just like 2 comments... but very nice work!... |
by (guest) (1-26-2005 - 11:57 PM)
| it was a kick ass poem with what i got an awsome meaning keep writing
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by Angel_IN_Hell (2-1-2005 - 12:04 AM)
| Really good...keep writting....i love all of ur hidden meaning things..**
-KELSEY- |
by (guest) (2-2-2005 - 05:47 PM)
| My first ime on this site totally loved your poem its so revealing and at you african queen |
by xpeterzxgurlx (2-21-2005 - 02:22 AM)
| very nice...very very nice... |
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